Thursday, May 7, 2009

As The Tears Fall...... Comments

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oh! tears flows in the world of happiness
come to my vision, taste the existence of my senses,
as you fulfill the presence of your destiny, where you
will always come in every eye the soul will cry
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Antonio Liao
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Kesav Easwaran 18 May 2009

Emotions flow out in your write, Anto...tears have always been good friends in our tough times...good composition...10

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Joseph Poewhit 07 May 2009

The word flow is very flowery with emotions

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ur emotions really get u poetic and expressive..which is marvelous! another magnificent write my friend

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rago rago 07 May 2009

what a write for tear......... you are always there, living with me until my heart will go, tilll iwill die..........thank your for your kind sharing.

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