Sunday, July 9, 2023

As The Tambourine Played Comments

Rating: 5.0

As The tambourine played,
We fell in love,
With her ethereal beauty,
With her exotic dresses,
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Reynaldo Casison
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M. Asim Nehal 10 July 2023

Tambourine: a musical instrument that has a circular frame covered with plastic or skin, with metal discs round the edge....Please clarify LOVE?

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M. Asim Nehal 10 July 2023

I am little bit confused here - to fell in love and already fallen in love with WHOM? Instrument or a GIRL? Poem is very well written

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Sheeya Hacks 10 July 2023

I would say a melody of love- this poem is free flowing with true feel. Full Stars.

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