As The Sunset Comments

This is truly wrote from the heart. wonderful in many ways

Great poem Brittany, you really carried me along on every powerful expression expressed. I love the powerful rhymes in these lines 'As d sunset how can I dare, I'm goin up, I just don't care' Thanks for making me happy with your creativity!

lovely poem, how you took the sense of nature and penned it. love it

Hi Brittany, good honest work, you have the ability to paint a real vivd picture without using too many adjectives. love it. Cant wait to read more of you work

As I have noticed you are from the Sunshine state, as only a true Floridian can admire the meaning of the sun. I really like your poem, the structure is superb and matches my own. Hope to read more soon... Great write. -Sincerely Jay Falcon USA

I really enjoyed this. Good write!

hey i lik dat one i can tell it's come from ur heart

This is a beautiful heartfelt piece. I truly enjoyed reading it. I think you hav alot of talent.

i like this it is nice -ryan

Hi Brittany. A very romantic and nicely written peice well done.

It was a very good poem... I liked it.