Saturday, September 6, 2008

As The Sun Begins To Set Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beyond the scarlet mountains
as the sun begins to set,
my heart aches to return home,
but my destiny is to endlessly roam.
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David Harris
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 06 September 2008

Life is a gamble everyday, do we or do we not go the right way...? Andy 10

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Mamta Agarwal 06 September 2008

my reward for abandonment is an eitht by ten cell, full of pathos, longing, regret and the heartache. lovely, moving. Mamta

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Lora Chase 06 September 2008

This poem is very heartfelt an touching, made me feel so sad for the people that lived there life this way, an wished they had a second chance.

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David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
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