Saturday, October 13, 2007

{as The Shadow Fades} Comments

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The rain falls softly all around
Wisps of hair frame my face
I stare solemnly into the puddle
Seeing a mirror of me
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Lillian Jamison
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Al Ramos 01 March 2008

One step back two steps forward, It will get you to where you are going faster. Very well said, hope to read more of your poems. Al

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