As The River Flows Along Comments

A lovely picture of the country side was drawn in this wonderful poem.... loved it

David, yours is a wonderful gift......you're able to paint scenes that cause one to feel that they are there with you taking it all in both with silent gratitude and the same degree of appreciation. Very well done!

Wow wonderful poem...Each lines so beautifully expressed that it give the complete picture of farms.... Loved reading it....Beautiful write. Thank you Sir, for the Beautiful and valuable comments...Which I will always store in my Autograph... As well as the beautiful remarks on my poet's page....Your words are inspiring... I will visit next week to PH to read yours poems. Thanks a lot.

This is so musical and splendid. Thanks again.

Wooooow! What an amazing poem, great imagery in this superb poem David, you painted a picture that never leaves the mind of a reader...amazing write. Siya_! !

taking us to the country side. nice imagery. a story well told.

What a beautiful descriptive write. You are certainly a great STORY TELLER. Thank you David

It's awesome Wood, Everything but the tick!

This is a beautiful write David. You're very talented. Have a great day

Nature in all its beauty abounds here in this poem taking me to my beautiful country side with its fields of paddy and bales of corn during the harvest season! Vast stretches of land where towering 'Teak' trees and squirrels running up and down their trunk is a common sight! ! Instead of horse carts, we had bullock carts! ! Beautiful poem! !

a beautiful image i got when i read your poem / poems....and the image is of nature...with sweet words and rhythm.what a reader wants more.. an exquisite poem..10

A fantastic poem, it brings back a lot of memories. I used to work on a farm in my younger days.

A beautiful poem David about nature it is so descriptive you make the reader feel as if they are there. Val has written one on the Weeping Willow and along with this poem they are both great pieces of work. well done.

Very descriptive, can just picture the scene. Nice write David.

All the wonderful aspects of Nature are beautifully reflected - As the river flows along! Fabulous!

Reminds of famous lines of Tennyson Men may come and men may go But I go on for ever You developed the entire background beautifully. Thank you.