There were ripples of the sparkling stream.
The crystalline water was mirroring the blue sky.
That befriended with the sun's wonderful beam.
Beams of the dazzling looking golden eye.
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Hazel has captured my thoughts with her words.....there a re a few issues with punctuation and tenses, but nothing serious. Congrats!
Stunning picture painted with lines of such beauty of nature's captivating charm captured with such ease!
The diff. branches of nature's charming beauties are drawn nicely in those words..... nice to read