Tuesday, January 7, 2014

As The River Flowed Comments

Rating: 5.0

There were ripples of the sparkling stream.
The crystalline water was mirroring the blue sky.
That befriended with the sun's wonderful beam.
Beams of the dazzling looking golden eye.
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Rohan Nath
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Amitava Sur 08 January 2014

The diff. branches of nature's charming beauties are drawn nicely in those words..... nice to read

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Mike Barrett 08 January 2014

Hazel has captured my thoughts with her words.....there a re a few issues with punctuation and tenses, but nothing serious. Congrats!

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Hazel Durham 08 January 2014

Stunning picture painted with lines of such beauty of nature's captivating charm captured with such ease!

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