As The Rain Hits The Leaves Comments

Very well written and with a superb tell telling ending. Thanks for sharing and I wish you well. Full marks. Take care.

I loved this piece and have shared it on my facebook account. Hope you don't mind it. (Checc Real Wordz for comments my friends have left about it)

This is Great. I laughed out loud when I read the line Clouds pink as a Floyd you could bury your eyes in. This poem does speak to me though. I also like the line Is there hope for a bliss that can make one's soul dance. I've been feeling melancholic lately and this poem really hits home.

So much meaning, clever,10 and on my fave list. Really special thank you

There is a pull in this poem that just...won't....leave.......me! Luckily I don't want it to. I keep coming back.

Clouds pink as a Floyd you could bury your eyes in God hides - Beauty is what he's disguised in My favorite lines, I love that you used a Pink Floyd reference! Very clever. I also like the perspective on time; truly a paradox. Very cool poem, gotta love those rainy, pensive days :)