**as The Rain Falls...** Comments

why is thy heart dislocated? Won't thou give me permission to locate it properly...LOL nice poem..touching ^_^

wow that was so sweet =] i love it.

passionate, and something i can relate to in a way very nice ~kerli

I love this one I can relate to it in so many ways And you're right, love can do wonders It can take over your mind nd they're all you think about I give it a 10

beautiful writing.....wonderful

I'll do whatever it takes, to make each day better then the last, iam sure u wil do, lovely peom