Saturday, September 6, 2008

As The Rain Cascades Comments

Rating: 4.9

The rain falls in perfect rhythm
Seemingly glowing against the ebony sky

The sound is soft and soothing
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Lillian Jamison
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Thad Wilk 06 September 2008

A lovely poem Lillian! Delightfully expressed! ! *10*! ! Best Wishes! Friend Thad

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 September 2008

Here a man may write a poem. A musing one in answer to this. The rain has nourished all the flowers, but the precious one did raindrops miss? The flower that a man adores is wondrously endowed, but she requires refreshing too or else she'll wear a shroud. To hide herself from him and all the lights that nature beams. And he only sees her shine as memorized in dreams. So every maiden just be sure to let it fall on you, so you may blossom in the morn. The next time he sees you. GW62

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Lillian Jamison

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