As The Pendulum Swung Comments

This is an amazing poem, probably the best you have ever written. The emotions sweeping through me as I read it were so deep and it's like I could feel your depression myself. Amazing, kevin. Keep writing. kayla

dude that is very very very deep

a well and heartfelt poem Kevin....

i really like it its writen well..you can kind of picture it its really good could you read some of mine and tell me what you think

i really love a poem that you can relate to, and while reading it, you feel yourself there, whether it be from now or some distant memory.gave you a 10. now fairs only fair, will you do me the honors of reading my newest edition..dont ask me.. but tell me what you really think.please rate it for what its worth.its not as serious as yours is.i played around with this one.just was tired of writing, my realities

Almost a Poe theme, would you say? I do so appreciate a poem with attention to spelling. Adeline

wo0o0o0ow i really felt ur pain! ! great poem i loved it 10 +++