Tuesday, November 29, 2016

As The Night Claims The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just as sure as the night claims the moon,
And as each dawn claims the rising sun,
I'll gather the woes that burden your heart
And claim them all, one by one
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 07 December 2016

and change it's to it is. :) bri

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Bri Edwards 07 December 2016

2nd to last line of my poem should start with a, not A

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Seamus O Brian 01 December 2016

I am struck silent by the wonder of this piece. But I will force my fingers to try and type the song these words made my heart sing. You have captured here a perspective of love in such a way that in all of my years I have the sense I have stumbled across something beautifully new. I was so captivated by that first stanza, that I did not want to move on, but relish it a few times over (can I admit timidly that I feared the remainder could not be as compelling as the first?) . But, to the contrary, you carried the quiet, earnest power of that first stanza all the way through. What a moving glimpse of the power of a love whose strength is such that it endures without recompense. You have blessed me with the most beautiful thoughts I have recently experienced. Thank you.

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Lora Colon

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