As the music plays
my heart aches
it aches with pain
pain of the past
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A beautiful evocative piece with a great structure and a lyrical soul. Very moving work. love, Allie xxxxxxx
beautiful. a very touching piece of well done poetry. it touches the heart real down deep, good write.
Wow! ! ! I LOVE this poem! ! ! About a thousand thoughs went through my head when I read the last stanza; I acutally read it over like 3 times. It's going on 'my poems' list for sure! ! Thank you. Josephine Adrian