Tuesday, January 30, 2007

As The Music Plays Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the music plays
my heart aches
it aches with pain
pain of the past
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Carissa Thiessen
COMMENTS
Josephine Adrian 28 March 2007

Wow! ! ! I LOVE this poem! ! ! About a thousand thoughs went through my head when I read the last stanza; I acutally read it over like 3 times. It's going on 'my poems' list for sure! ! Thank you. Josephine Adrian

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Alison Cassidy 15 February 2007

A beautiful evocative piece with a great structure and a lyrical soul. Very moving work. love, Allie xxxxxxx

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Tracie Brown 02 February 2007

BEAUTIFUL POEM. MAKES YOU WANT TO CRY.

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Jim Foulk 30 January 2007

beautiful. a very touching piece of well done poetry. it touches the heart real down deep, good write.

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Amr Alaa 30 January 2007

A great poem! I really got touched. Amr

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Carissa Thiessen

Carissa Thiessen

Calgary, Ab
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