Friday, May 16, 2008

***as The Moments By The Time *** Comments

Rating: 2.8

as I wait to see the blue moon
the shadow still expands by the clouds
where each speckle of the wind mimes me
the moment of the time in its tone of truth
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Dr subhendu kar
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Subbaraman N V 20 May 2008

Sure 'would all disappear in due course'! Well crafted!

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Abha Sharma 16 May 2008

Truth will find its strong foot in all age No matter the illusions play The history will unfold them again For the benefit of Mankind …………….enchanting lines revealing the great truth of life…. Abha

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Thad Wilk 16 May 2008

Great read Dr. Kar, hope does persist and prevails for the sun will lift the shadows as the new day opens after the illusions felt in this darkness are gone, by its own rules of due course. Best regards, Friend Thad *10*! ! !

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Joseph Poewhit 16 May 2008

Paints a nice picture

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