Thursday, September 18, 2008

As The Mist Descends Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the mist descends upon
The autumn day so still and calm,
The sun does glow as if an orb
Alone up in the sky,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Tsira Goge 02 February 2009

Causes only pleasant and fine to memoirs... Remarkably write, my friend. 10x10... / Thank you.../ Kindest regards, Tsira

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Kesav Easwaran 20 September 2008

An excellent poem...words flow like a stream smooth and transparent...the last two lines give all the more pleasing read 10

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Ernestine Northover 20 September 2008

I really like this kind of rhyming by you Andrew. You seem to have the knack of doing if so well, I don't think I would do it half as well that's for sure. This is a lovely piece once again, I so enjoy reading your poems the flow is immaculate and the picture you paint is so dreamy and peaceful. A really relaxing read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Nosherwan Khan 19 September 2008

An excellent poem about the setting of the sun and the surrounding landscape You have given a good thought to the rhymes and the flow of the stanzas! ! !

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