As The Mangalyan 14 Woos The Mars Comments

I thank all of you for your sweet comments

A Great poem. India's dream mission shuttle- MANGALYAN is successful. Really a great achievement. Beautiful description of sad Moon and the red Mars shy like a bride in veil, our lovely planet green Earth. The question at the last left me wondered.... Will a song will come very often praising red Mars. Loved reading it.

It is the Moon weeping With the man going for romance with the Mars Always the farther one looks more interesting whether on earth or in space. You have nicely portrayed this in your beautiful poem. Let the scientific mission succeed. First step is landing.

Twinkle twinkle little star we are now on the mars. a beautiful write

Twinkle twinkle little star we are on the mars. a beautiful write

This is simply a phenomenal piece with great imagination in the context of Mangalyan's expedition to Mars and successful landing there and the moon is somehow not easy and looking deserted, pale and at the same jealous.....Dineshji......the resentment is quite natural.......superb piece...10/10

This is a wonderful composition! As usual your update on India's space expedition and the latest news of international acclaim! Yes, we can be proud of Mangalyan's successful entry into the orbit of Mars! Enjoyed the poet's fancy of Moon left deserted and crying, as man has approached his new blushing bride Mars to be wooed and explored! Great poem and top marks!