As The Lord Is Ensconced In His Chariot… Comments

Devotional pieces leading to peace.

This is beautiful Indira. It reads like a latter day Upanishad. I loved it. 10+++

astonishing poetry..... i love this.

dear indira....i have no words to say! the poem is beautiful in meaning and also feelings.i have been to puri to see rathyatra many times.....your poem describes the moment, when you see the lord of the world on the chariot.the feeling of fear, excitement, awe and finally bliss.you write beautifully indira! .....ritty

squash this clay mould of imperfection you moulded more out of habit in a fleeting wink of disinterestedness great work... each word is soo genuine and pure... got a flow and cohesion even each stanza is one short prayer... Indira, you know the art and I would love to learn from you... Regards, Kamran

read it again...and the third prayer is awesome.... a-huh...got no words. thank you.

thnq sarvesh for pointing out the inconsistency in the poem. actually each stanza is one short prayer with different conceptions of this body. i should have seperated each. i did it now after reading your close comments. thnq, once again, young man!

i take my words back maam, awesome, simply awesome.

wonderful.... 'this shallow chariot time and again deviates from its course…' very true. spectacular piece... a li'l bit inconsistent i tht, but effective nevertheless. in all, awesome. thank you.

'o, lord crush this sand-particle under your divine wheels as your mighty chariot rolls along the sandy bay' Stunning composition.