Thursday, March 17, 2016

As The Keys B A N G E D …. …..[humor; Fiction; Medium Length; Noisy Neighbor] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Have you ever had this horrid ordeal:
listening to a learning-musician feel …
his or her way through a new selection, ]
striving every H O U R to reach music-perfection?
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Hope, Bri's stepdaughter has learned piano by now, or she has stopped playing it altogether. Or else we can expect another poem

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Loved this great poem. Enjoyed the subtle humour and fantastic rhyme.We all know. Bri is a genius, when it comes to poetry. And I read his "poet's note too"

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Bharati Nayak 25 June 2022

Music can drive one mad (I mean wrong notes) .New learners should be excused.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 24 June 2022

Kim Barney said it best, as shall be seen, in 2016, as he himself can attest.

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Kim Barney 23 June 2022

I can't top the comment I made in 2016...

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Bri Edwards 23 June 2022

I'll now leave myself a comment on this TERRIBLY WONDERFUL poem....by me...in hopes of bringing joy to more readers. ; : )))

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Loke Kok Yee 26 August 2016

There is such a thing called an ear plug Meant to prevent you from going nuts And if you have lots of dough to spare Sony Headphones will remove despair

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Stephen Katona 23 May 2016

Awesome poem Bri. You've brought a smile to my face with this funny flowing tale.

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Mike Smith 16 April 2016

Invest in a saxophone and wail it to the tunes of screeching alley cats in a battle over a drumstick in the garbage. That'll learn that blasted pianist

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Mj Lemon 20 March 2016

I can relate to every word, every line here. Years ago I lived not next door to a pianist, but the World's Greatest Drummer. And the PD didn't care, and the drumming went on and on and on and on.....Just great! This poem, I mean.

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Valsa George 19 March 2016

Despite the 'cacophony' you have written a beautiful poem! You should be thankful to the pianist! Really enjoyed......! ! Yes..... I am serious Bri....!

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Brian Mayo 18 March 2016

Great poem- -thoroughly enjoyable and fun to read.! Are you sure it's not a cat up there? I noticed against him is a close enough rhyme- -you didn't even need to add- -in the next election. I will use this knowledge to help me in my next rhyming poem- -I need to get away from Strong Rhyme- -(boat, coat) - -the mark of an amateur- -but currently all of my poems are laden with it. You have just inadvertently shown me that the possibilities are endless- -just the HINT of a rhyme is sufficient, and in fact, preferred..

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Wes Vogler 18 March 2016

Complete sympathy. I live in a condo and my upstairs neighbour is beefy and walks on his heels. Even soft slippers isn't much of a help. They go south six months a year but his relatives who often use his condo have the same heavy tread. I may install a baffle but there are all sorts of problems and rules to pull this off.

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Kelly Kurt 17 March 2016

Practice makes perfect...but only before 10 PM

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Kim Barney 17 March 2016

And as the keys so loudly banged You wished your neighbor would be hanged. Surely a jury would decide It was justifiable homicide.

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Ha ha ha ha ha! Nobody can best this poetical comment!

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