As The Evening Falls Comments
As the evening falls,
Birds return to their nest.
The twilight clouds wander around,
Leaving a floating chiaroscuro of lights and shades
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Your Nature poems are beautiful! The clouds sailing in the sky and slowly disappearing out of sight are being watched by you from your window in the time of dusk fall! You wonder to which hide out they are retreating! Only a poet will have such thoughts on seeing the clouds in the sky! Beautiful description of a sunset!
How you have imagined my thoughts as I wrote the poem, and expressed those in the comment is a great inspiration for me as a poet. Thank you Valsa!
You have painted with poetic words the magic beauty of sunset! A delightful read!
It's a great delight for me too, @Mihaela Pirjol, to have you here and read my poem. Much inspired by your appreciative comment, thank you.
Wow great wording, new word for me, 'chiaroscuro ', sounds poetic. It's creatively impressive how u have described the window bars as a cage alluding yet to happy domestic life. Could relate to that. Superb freeverse style here poet. Kudos. Pls do comment on my latest writing prose too titled, 'stand tall and proud yet humbly bow'
Appreciate your kind reading of my poem and its thoughtful appreciation, @S.zaynab Kamoonpuri. I have just read and commented on your poem 'Pink Mania Inking'.
A nice poetic imagination, Ahsan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Thanks for your comment, @Jazib Kamalvi. I have just read your poem 'Poetic Inspiration' and commented on it.
Beautiful description of nature at twilight. I love the phrase cage of happy domesticity.
Thank you very much, @Nidhi Agrawal, for reading this poem. Perhaps this is the first time you have visited my page. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a kind comment. I am glad that you've liked that particular line of the poem.
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7/25/2025 8:44:37 AM # 1.0.0
a set of pretty pictures you draw with poetic words. lovely crickets lovely poem When the lovers take a moonlight stroll, And discuss their secrets in rapt attention, Even the crickets stop their evening song, As softly silence speaks, they stroll along!