Monday, January 2, 2006

As The Egg Bled Comments

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as i cracked the shell of the egg,
and as it bled out its unformed self,
i in tired confusion sat down and wept,
not for the egg, not for the sleeping loves,
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Max Reif 02 January 2006

You use the bleeding egg symbol well to prefigure and parallel the releasing of your grief, Vincent. 'Paint my face' too, is an original way to say 'emotion'. One tiny thing, it should be 'butterflies'.

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Moya Levy 02 January 2006

That's a feeling I can relate to Vincent, nicely written, Moyax

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