Saturday, November 28, 2009

As The Devil Dines Comments

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To gain your respect I've done my best
To show I'm perfect
Show you I'm worth it
But I know I don't deserve it
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Tony Beebe 28 November 2009

you know what? im feeling this! i like it :) it flows well and ur use of rhyme (although rhyme can be somewhat 'sing-songy' at times but not necessarily in this piece) conjures strength. nice

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Karly Jaye

Karly Jaye

California
Karly Jaye
Karly Jaye
California
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