Sunday, January 6, 2008

As The Days Pass And The Time Flies Comments

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as the days pass
and the time flies
minutes have turned
into hours
...
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shannon wright
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Roger Cornish 20 January 2008

I really love the line..'every morning I have to remember to forget you'. There's honesty here...Poetry bares one's soul. Excellent! Rogerx.

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Muriel Emerson 08 January 2008

nice very nice it must have been painful and it shows you true feelings nice very nice

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Robert Howard 08 January 2008

What a stunning account of tragic loss. I am sure it was painful to write and, as beautifully written as it is, it is painful to read as well.

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Patricia Gale 07 January 2008

A piece of your heart shows in this piece Shannon.

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