Monday, May 19, 2008

As The Days Go Comments

Rating: 5.0

These words should not be read beneath
the light, not even the moons for fear
that they will not be seen as they should.
These words should be read in a quiet corner,
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Ben Partenay
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Marvin Brato 19 May 2008

Quite perceptive thoughts you portrayed here, lingering pain from the wound of a lost love for substantial reason cannot always vanished as the days go. Fixing a lost love is not worth the pain, but letting it go another love you will gain! A 10.

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