Tuesday, October 13, 2009

As The Day Was Passing Comments

Rating: 5.0

The waves lapped gently to the shore
as a flotilla of sailboats rested
in corridors on the water
with their white sails stained crimson
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David Harris
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Stephen Stirk 16 October 2009

A truly lovely scene David, painted with your pen. The harbours and bays have such a magnetic pull. It matters not where they are. I am drawn to the sights and sounds of boats, and have watched may a beautiful sun, set on such a scene. Lovely poem Best Steve

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Patti Masterman 13 October 2009

Very peaceful and inviting. I could feel the waves gently lapping against the shore..smile)

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Carol Gall 13 October 2009

really beautiful words flow with the water 10

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David Scott 13 October 2009

Simply beautiful writing! I love it!

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David Harris

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