Thursday, February 28, 2008
As The Day Goes Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Choices and wrong turns are made,
as the day goes and the sun fades.
People are loved and hearts broken;
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Coach Roth
08 March 2008
Love the repetition of 'as the day goes'...captures perfectly the longevity yet beauty of caring for children and the everyday tasks...nice job...Coach
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7/19/2025 11:34:49 AM # 1.0.0
Sparkling imagery with in these lovely couplets. As the day goes we meet friends from afar, they fill our world with wonder no one car mar. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David