Wednesday, May 16, 2007

As The Day Comes And Goes Comments

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Fog....
Pearl white mist...
The wind blows and the tree sways
Eyes open looking to find my way
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Shalia Robinson
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Glaedr the poet 16 May 2007

Very visual! I like the progressiveness of it. You go from one part of the day to another, sleep, and then awake into a new morning.

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