Tuesday, January 8, 2008

As The Day Breaks Comments

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As the day breaks
my world changes
the clouds come out,
covering the night moon.
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Kassie B
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Emily Oldham 20 September 2008

inspiring and melodical... also dreamy... nice, I like it. Athena :)

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Bonnie Collins 08 January 2008

Very inspirational, actually, I like your choice of words. Hopefull, every cloud has a silver lining theme, and once in awhile we need to believe that as we get caught up in this busy world, dont you agree? ? Bonnie Collins

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