Wednesday, May 13, 2009

As The Day Breaks Comments

Rating: 4.7

Dusk has gone and day breaks
the waves ebb at the stones under my feet
I look out to sea as the dawns first light
washs over the land and fills the air with warmth
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Eric Elliott
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Indira Renganathan 21 September 2009

'We, all that was left just will NOT last '...yes...we are all the would be infernals....touching poem

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Rachel Butler 16 September 2009

Dusk has gone and day breaks the waves ebb at the stones under my feet. Rachel Ann Butler

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Michael Moorcroft 16 August 2009

You are very talented and the dark imagery is really effective.

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hmmm..... i like it! ...it's very different, and creative! ! ! you got a 10 from me!

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Eric Elliott

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HELL! ! ! ! (maybe)
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