As The Bell Clinks Comments
As I left the Halls at Lumley, rose the vision of a comely
Maid last season worshipped dumbly, watched with fervor from afar;
And I wondered idly, blindly, if the maid would greet me kindly.
That was all -- the rest was settled by the clinking tonga-bar.
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At first I thought fine satire or parody of Poe's 'The Raven', however... it lacks so much the surreal thing has. Good effort though.
This has an enchanting rhythm similar to Edgar Allan Poe's 'The Raven'. The story it tells is also enchanting. It is much better than the 5.4 rating given by the 52 voters so far.
You surely know how to wrote, I like each and every poem of yours
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7/18/2025 4:46:44 PM # 1.0.0
Another wonderful poem!