Sunday, June 28, 2009

As The Actress Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the actress talks,
As she walks,
As gracefully takes the stage,
Shes says the words,
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Rosalita Fern
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Adi Cox 05 July 2009

A great poem about ambition, desire and a longing for something more. A neat poem that explains a universal theme in a unique way. A very accessible poem.10/10.

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You have captured so well the yearning an actress has to play a leading role. An expression of creativity to be enjoyed by others. Lovely writing. Karin Anderson

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~ Jon London ~ 29 June 2009

And all your dreams will be yours my lovely...keep your faith....This piece is beautiful in all it's glory...wonderful expression Rosalita my friend....a real gem

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