As Tears Fall Comments

So this is how you cry, the process of crying. This Crying thing is usually felt but defining the miniscule moment in a heart rendering way...you did it nicely....we feel it you wrote it. keep writing

A beautiful poem rich in texture and imagery. Very nice indeed.10

cannot feel the dryness of my throat my thirst is empty with unremitting faith only to become quenched when I touch you again as tears fall.....LOVELY EMOTIONAL FEELING AND REAL LOVE FOR EACH OTHER.. IT SHOWS DEEP BONDING AND PURE FEELINGS....10 READ MINE.. AN OPEN INVITATION... AN END TO SOLITUDE

nothing can stop tears from faaaaa...ling. only tears know when to stop...