* As Sun-Song Comments

nice imagination...words rustle down smooth sweet...10

A truly beautiful piece - a little journey through poetic paradise. S :)

Quiet wanderng in the valleys together sounds so peaceful Tsira - - a lovely warm verse....10 + ++ Fay

I don't know for sure that the 'imagery in this brief song captures you' as a poet in your own right or as wish fulfillment for guys like David Harris who prowl these precincts in search of such as yourself, Tsira! I enjoyed your quatrain as you composed it - with perhaps a change here or there- We wandered long in valleys under the sun past blood-red poppies and white camomiles- he sang to the flutter of butterfly wings which rustled like moonbeams in the night!

Tsira, the imagery captures you immediately you begin to read this beautiful poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

Your words are just beautiful Tsira,10/10 from Tom

It must have sounded heavenly Tsira Thanks Daniel 10

beautiful Tsira, sun song indeed... Andy 10