As Strangers Pass By Comments

I really enjoyed reading this story in verse about the power of love.A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing

The passing away of his wife His one and only life, She made the day shine with splendour And without strife, ................... Wow11111 Great WRite from great poetess, you have really shared a great poem here in poemhunter, thanks for sharing, ++++++++++++++++ 10

A captivating story in verse, Hazel. I believe in the redeeming power of love now we pray that his heart is still full of love for her and her love for him... it would be easy to try to ease his pain in the bottle but he is trying to be good for his love.... very haunting story and full of compassion

He seems to be in a trap Of his own doing And he himself can be with the angel Again in this rest life ......Feel your sadness and sorrow

For him getting her as a partner in life was a kind of rebirth! Before he could feed and bloat on the love she lavished on him, she was gone! This is too much for him to bear! No wonder he is broken and is not able to accept the fact of her untimely demise! He lives in the vain hope that one day she would return! A touching write!

The cold December rain pours without mercy for his constant pain. He wanders around passing by strangers in streets, bushes and trains. But she has made the day shine with splendour. Loving and beautiful wife has understood life with love. A deeply emotional and perceptional poem is brilliantly penned...10

A poignant narrative of the transformative power of love. I enjoyed reading this and playing the visuals in my mind as the story unfolds. Nicely done, good poet. Bravo. :) S