Saturday, October 22, 2016

As Still As The Twilight Before The Dawn Comments

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Azure hues at twilight are imminently rising
transforming to melting lavenders and pink.
Every clock suddenly reverses rushing
toward the quiescence of yesteryears.
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Paul Amrod
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 November 2016

no one will read this no one will comment u must stanzize it else be satisfied 'tis posted i too will then read reduce to lines 14-19 only

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Paul Amrod 15 November 2016

Hi I do not see any reason to break the flow with stanzas. I have other poems with stanzas. I thank you for your suggestion. Greetings, Paul

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Paul Amrod

Chateaugay, New York
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