Friday, January 11, 2008

As Sorrow Leads Comments

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You walk in the door no one does anything
Your walk to your room without a word
They say nothing
Their silence is the wound, it is the sword
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Bethany Maxwell
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Michelle Dickson 31 January 2008

This is probably the closest you will come to actually describing what it means for people to be alone. The 2nd worst wound in my opinion is being alone or being ignored by the people you hold dear to your heart. I know what you mean when you say 'you walk to your room without a word, they say nothing' Ive felt the same way, but hey if you actually felt this way then hopefully we'll both make it another day. Hopefully. oh, this is a VERY GOOD poem by the way. I really like it.

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Shannon Wright 15 January 2008

Bethany- Beautifully haunting. -shannon

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Bethany Maxwell

Bethany Maxwell

some where in this universe muhahaha
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