And then you were gone
And everything went black,
Everything was so messed up
Since you didn’t come back,
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As a musician in a band i say this would make great song. You should be a lyricist. Great job cupcake man. -Jeff Bassist in NYJ
hmmm y do i get a feelin i was there when u felt like this...*coughTcough* o man im chokin. but other then tat i love it^^ as i do with all ur poemsso yea im out of things 2 say ^^U so ttyl8z ur best friend, GiR
great poem thanks. keep writing! Athena *** words will change the world ***