Saturday, October 8, 2005

As Soon As I Get There Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can see through
The soggy afternoon,
Your words inspired
By ancient pines,
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Pamela Davison
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2019

Through the soggy afternoon you can see the beauty of words of inspiration. Dreams are satisfied with moonlit poise. Beneath the tree of reality we feel documented joy. An excellent poem rich with imagery and perception is very well penned...10

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Tears In Rain 12 November 2005

I'll get there when I get there. Thanks for the astute demonstation of a more evolved state of awareness. I'll let me get there yet.

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Ivy Christou 21 October 2005

i wish that i could pause sometimes and let me in.. easier said than done! Great write HBH

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Uriah Hamilton 08 October 2005

Let yourself in, the only eternal reality.

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