As Soon As Fred Gets Out Of Bed Comments

I was just kidding. This child is clearly acting out. I fully agree with Kalinda evers. This poem is giving children the idea that putting your nasty underwear on your head.

HA HA FUNNI

Induced smile on my lips although sealed.when is it borne on the right place is a mistry.

this poem is funny like L.O.L

This poem is funny he doesn't know where to put his underwear

Amusing expression. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the modern poem of the day.

At night when Fred goes back to bed, he deftly plucks it off his head. His mother switches off the light and softly croons, " Good night! Good night! " endearing. tony

Too funny with a nice rhyme scheme. Well-written. Loved it! : -)

I stand by my original comments only to add thank heavens there is more than good comedy in well written poems. So cleverly written and beautifully presented.10++

underwear for Fred visits him at every night Head to Toe nobody knows reason but only dark night's activist! ! ! quite Terrible FUNNY!

An insightful piece of poetry written with a tinge of humour. A beautiful creation.

Very funny! With Humour. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Very well-written and very funny. In the style of the late Roald Dahl.

i dont read heeeeeeeeheeeeeeee

I loved it. It was a funny short story

Im LeBron James.....................

This is awesomely written

no homooooooiooooo o

boyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy whats coveing his middle part

i really like hwne he siad the n word cuz thats racist