Friday, January 23, 2009

As Softly As The Stream Does Flow Comments

Rating: 4.9

As softly as the stream does flow
Down from the hills above,
The waters pass and yet I know
They shall not bring me love.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Roxanne 31 December 2019

Joe.K. Walsh, the excellent mandolin player did a song adaptation of this poem, which I really like.

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Duncan Wyllie 31 August 2009

All of the feeling comes across intact, , another beautifully sad piece again by you Andrew all the best Love duncan X

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Kite Remedy 03 February 2009

very beautiful, yet I feel it rather lonesome.. all the events are nicely depicted here in this poem..

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C. P. Sharma 03 February 2009

An appealing imagery from Nature and the soft and graceful music flows through your poem. 10++++++++ CP

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Sandra Fowler 23 January 2009

The stream is a metaphor for your silent tears that flow for what can never be. Very poignant and romantic.10 for you, my gifted friend. Kind regards, Sandra

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