Come winter relent let me hold her once more,
Let me feel all the joy that I had felt before,
Through the cold of December I wait here so long,
While these days are so empty I try to be strong,
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Oh Andrew, This really sad and tucked me by the core.... Your writtings are so very touching all of them I can honestly say, I have NOT NOT liked any of them.. I feel you write from within your heart dont you? THis is trully beautifull beyond words.....Excellent in my oppion.... Bonnie
A beautiful poem of love. The imagery was superlative. I enjoyed reading this wonderful piece of write.
Ok, perhaps it's because it's late, or perhaps I may be a bit emotional here, , but... This could easily bring me to tears So, so.....WELL WRITTEN Love duncan X
Ah..almost makes me want to melt like a tiny crystal of ice in your arms..hope your love finds you soon x
This is a lyrical piece filled with longing and some lovely images. The repetition works very well to give weight to your snowflake metaphor and your theme is, sadly, a universal one. A lovely romantic read. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Andrew what else one say but an all around beautiful and heartfelt write! ! *10*! ! ! Thanks for sharing my friend! Best regards Thad
A profound poem by a true wordsmith Mr Blakemore.Thanks for sharing.Some themes one can identify with, especially during the cold lonely winter nights. Sid