Friday, August 29, 2014

As She Wrought Comments

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She was dressed to the nines,
And looking so fine.
Searching each night
For the perfect sight.
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Darlene Walsh
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Amitava Sur 20 August 2015

WOW' Daelene - that's a nice penning in deed.I get a message from this poem like - You can never be so choosy / rigid so that you wont find anybody in your life and thus one day you'll be totally deceived at last

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 04 September 2014

Wow fabulous n relatable. If we r too choosy and picky at spouse selection, we may end up with nothing. U structured it swell too. Do pls review my latest poem too.

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Lorraine Colon 30 August 2014

Good poem Darlene. Gives us something to think about - maybe not to be so critical of everyone and just learn to accept and tolerate.

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Darlene Walsh 20 August 2015

Tolerant :) Accepting people as they are, that would be a magical world to live in.

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