Thursday, July 18, 2019

As She Arrives Comments

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Breezy moments before her arrival
That none what so in the world can rival,

The fury unfurled well before comes she,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 July 2019

Breezy moments before ''her'' arrival That none what so in the world can rival The fury unfurled well before comes ''she, '' Much like the frenzy of a stormy sea, JUST BEAUTIFUL STANCE of poetry o poet SHE YOU so quickly twist from SHE to SEA in transformation petrichor monsoon's first drops you know LOVELY VERSE O AP

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 July 2019

Petrichor, yes, and you help me appreciate that fragrance and spread deep into my life. Thank you indeed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 July 2019

Yes, talking I'm of my life's tender love, Monsoon's first few showers from far above— A strange calm then follows sudden downpour That touches ah my being's deepest core. ... loved these lines. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared. TFS. ____________________________________

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 July 2019

You are another kind heart and a fine judge of good poetry. Your appreciation goes a long way, dear KM.

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