***as Quietness Flows Onshore*** Comments
in an afternoon summer still too hot
heart when cries by the pain of fire
let the rain come by the clouds of colors
when crooning yet bestirs from long years
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Everything about this fine write, whispers into the readers ears....look how pretty i am...smell my sweet scent....enjoy this time with me....let me flood your mind with a wash of colour and lushes loveliness.........'10' from me Doc best wishes Jon
such a colourful write... so much alive... I like your alliteration: 'quintessence of queries' - interesting vocabulary proving your eloquence...Your imagery is wonderful - it adds a great embodiment to the whole piece :)
Excuse my rudeness... but I have kept this in my favs.. in its condensed version (first of each line.. in this instance... I need no more) in an afternoon summer still too hot rain drizzles by the dream of desire the captive quest cascades by the redemption dazzling glows overlaying the opal gemstones is it the definition of love overreaching the passion .. quietness when flows onset over the quiescence.
When 'quietness flows on shore' how else it can be! Great creation!
The beauty showered in the lines is really mesmerizing where souls are blessed with such graceful natural beauty… Soul sweetened by moist earth… Where musical rain drops rattle With the brightness of sun……..very impressing. Abha
A lovely and bedazzling poem of beauty as it flows, captured wonderfully through your words and penning Dr. Kar! Best regards, Friend Thad *10*! !
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7/20/2025 1:34:11 PM # 1.0.0
wonderful descriptive poem of nature, well embedded feelings and deep thoughts, lovely to read..10+++++++++