it is all through feeling of lone voice
as stuck at a point of time and space
aloofness heaves heart yet ruefully
by pangs of sorrow and separation,
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Another fantastic poem.Out of the last three posted I like this best.The poem depicts pang of separation and the desire to get back the lost link.But simultaneously, as per my understanding, the last two lines instill hope or rejuvenate the mind even under the singular condition.What I meant, if we get conditioned to a separated situation, we perhaps reorient ourselves to derive pleasure from whereever we are.
Use of colors in the last stanza is amazing......Amongst your new poems, I liked it the most, as here the poet seems to free himself from unnecessary burden of words.
…sky dapples in blue by gleams of enlightenment verdant green redeems in glaze by sun-rays...’ ‘Sky looks for Enlightenment Thro’ entertainment In azurement Hallowed by Sun God’s Ray galore Where verdant allure’ ~ niv…imbed -> diffused -> perfuse -> suffuse 10//10++ Ms. Nivedita UK