Thursday, January 15, 2009

As Predicted (Incomplete) Comments

Rating: 4.8

when the veils of greed will cover the eyes
when the heart stops weep on the innocent cries
when the beast puts the human skin as disguise
just think that day once told will arise
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Asif Gopang 11 December 2009

Dear it’s good as like u! (I miss u) . after read that...! I can see ur personality hidden intelligence it’s very good keep writing, we LOVE U and ur thought. YOURS.

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Dr Kamran Haider 22 January 2009

Truth nothing but truth... Excellent work... You have a great vision my friend...

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Unfortunately your poem is crying out the truth of what our world is fast becoming. I often imagine myself as an alien arriving in this world and seeing the devastation and fruitless wars human beings create. Asif this poem is brilliant and you are spot on! Excellent work. Karin Anderson

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Seema Aarella 17 January 2009

It gives me jitters just the thought of such day......as expected it will all happen one day, just like we destroy a dead appliance, god will cast the doom and destroy this earth! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Eveything is sure!

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sumaira .....ir 17 January 2009

A true and very sensitive poem which show us the reality of life... Thankx dear i really respect yer thoughts.

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Aijaz Asif 15 January 2009

yes Anju you are absolutely right, that day has arisen and that day is today and every coming day and i think that day can be changed by YOU, ME & EVERY OTHER person who's heart greive for the happenings in the world today, cause I've seen it, in the verses written by many poets here on PH, who rose their words against the cruelty and wars put on innocents and I bow You & Everyone of Them for the purity of there heart.... One day the sun will rise with happiness in its eyes spreading rays of love and peace smiling gracefully to You & Me One Day, One Day and soon that one day will some

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Anjali Sinha 15 January 2009

I think that day has arisen its here--- tell me how are YOU and ME gonna make it go to its grave again tell me so that it NEVER RISES AGAIN inspirational write Asif I loved it A+++and many 10ssssss regards anju

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