Monday, June 4, 2018

As Peacock Prances Comments

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My heart is a peacock
Showing out feathers
Beckoning to you
Come hither
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Doris Cornago
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Carl Roussell 05 June 2018

I excellent poem on being true to who you are! A 10.

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Doris Cornago 05 June 2018

Yes, there's two and more of us. Thank you for this keen interpretation. :)

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Doris Cornago 04 June 2018

You may be misunderstood when you dance but glory in the message you bring out to the world, the essence of your existence. But be thrifty with words, and not be too exuberant with the display of your dexterity which dilutes the poignancy of a moment's distillation - given only to you and no one else. This is your commission, not the adulation.

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