As One Little Snowflake Comments
As one little snowflake does float down so gently
Then rests on the pavement so frozen and bare,
It dwells all-alone through the depths of December
And toils through the hardship for no one does care.
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Andrew, never question your abillities, just write, then read them Love duncan X Awaiting the springtime To thaw in the sunlight To then turn to water And melt to a stream, Where it can flow to The river and ocean And then to feel wanted And part of a dream. There to belong to And join with the others And making the waves that Shall roll to the shore, While ebbing and moving To glisten like diamonds And sharing a love that Shall last evermore.
I agree to the comment of Ma’am Bonnie Collins…your closely associate nature with the sentiments of men, a perfect relation with beautiful nature imagery with snow flakes, crystals shinning like diamonds.., reminds me of ‘BIRCHES’ of Frost. Well composed, every stanza enriched with attractive imagery… **Abha**
What a great read Andrew, fascinating to say the least, your poems ever cease to amaze Best regards, Friend Thad *10*! !
Andrew, are you sure you are not related to ROBERT FROST? ? What a beautifull write, with so much tender imagery..... Excellent as always! ! Bonnie
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7/20/2025 9:17:19 PM # 1.0.0
This is very sweet Andrew. A dear little snowflake the reader wants to pick up and take home. It would make a beautiful children's story - illustrated of course. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥