Sunday, September 30, 2007

{as One} Comments

Rating: 3.5

My heart so full of love and passion
My body so full of sweetest desire

My eyes see only you
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Lillian Jamison
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 March 2008

together as one....eternally.

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Linda Weischedel 10 January 2008

Precious poem, short and sweet and to the core! Giving you a 10 for this, Always,

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 October 2007

yet lovely poem, really smooching, i appreciate, wellpenned

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Qistina Zaini 01 October 2007

nice poem, good job...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 30 September 2007

The eyes never lie...so they say....Great Work. ~ ~ ~

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Poison 9901 30 September 2007

Lillian, This is a great write, for such a small poem, it says so much My favorite line though is the last (Two hearts, two bodies, two souls As one) As it should be. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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Lillian Jamison

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