Tuesday, February 2, 2016

As On Unhydrous Dry Land Comments

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Το her charismatic nature,
shimmering-although a little bit stony- beauty
οnly great matters, important things were to fit.
These reckoned she in due course to deal with.
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Timothy Mcpoetry 30 March 2016

I had to lookup anhydrous, but what a nice poem. Brings several clear pictures to mind.

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Dimitrios Galanis 09 March 2017

Thank you, my dear, for the kind word.

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Valsa George 04 February 2016

We pass the ordinary pleasures of life as mere trifles and focus our attention only on the grandiose. Later we come to regret the lost moments and long for them like a piece of parched land thirsting for water! Beautifully composed in elegant and choicest words! I have written a poem A Fool on the same topic, but in a simpler style!

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Dimitrios Galanis 04 February 2016

I had the feeling I was in the same train to see all those things described.That only was enough to fill the time past.To watch life around is not something not as great to regard.

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Dimitrios Galanis 04 February 2016

I had the feeling I was in the same train to see all those things described.That only was enough to fill the time past.To watch life around is not something not as great to regard.dozens of words fitted to expand once perception of life.An oxymoron.It is something wurth just to live attending it.

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Kelly Kurt 02 February 2016

The language used brought a depth of meaning to this piece

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Dimitrios Galanis 02 February 2016

Taken into notice.I'm not afraid of literary critic, dear Kelly.That is what I expect from you.Thank you.

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