Monday, July 28, 2008

__As My Tear Commits Suicide__ Comments

Rating: 5.0

A tear in the corner of your eye
on the edge, ready to die
as it kills itself, falls, paying farewell to the cheeks
infact apologising, in the absence of laughter and squeeks
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POOJA LADYLUCK
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Tom Balch 28 July 2008

Love this piece alot, well done 10/10

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